Anyone?

Jason Horger

“Anyone back?” called Danielle, easing forward.

Getting her inside Jen’s kitchen left me nervous, outside, pacing. “Quicker!”

“Really, sweetie. Trust us.”

“Verily.” Wishing Xanex yielded zzzzzzz’s.

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©Jason Horger, July 25, 2010 in A-Z, Alphabet story, English Stories Tweet This Post

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4 Responses to “Anyone?”

  1. Bill Kirton says:

    Very, very skilful. I love it, Jason.

  2. Anneke Klein says:

    This is true flash fiction, tickles the reader’s mind pleasantly.

  3. Diane Nelson says:

    Excellent. I love it.

  4. Jason Horger says:

    Y’know, this *is* my first flash fiction, isn’t it? What a great exercise, particularly for me…my short stories have a habit of outgrowing the pot when I’m the gardener!

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